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Humanity Paragraph: In my opinion, to be human is to be imperfectly perfec t. I say this simply due to the natural balance of life that accompanies our evolution; always having ultimate to those who live under it. We basically just work around whatever the universe throws at us and we make our greatest attempts to comfort ourselves in the uncertain reality we live in. If we got everything we wanted, there would be nothing to ever look forward to because EVERYTHING that could ever possibly happen w ould already completely known and understood. The bottom line is, to be human is to live with everything else under one "roof" giving everyone an equal chance to succeed and have equal contributions to the overall outcome of our idea of the universe and it's wonders. THANK YOU

Nice job! Good expression of ideas and support. Be sure to proof read your work...you probably would have caught the couple of little mistakes.

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